Post 4: flash fiction
A girl and her cousins were outside on a summer day in July.
They were playing with rocks and throwing them in the road. While they were
throwing rocks in the road, they noticed that a man as coming their way. The girls
were used to people going up and down the street, some were even crazy. It did
not bother them though. However, this time as different. As the man got closer,
one of the girls whispers “Stranger danger”, and they try to leave as quickly
but calmly as possible. As they got on the porch, the man starts yelling at
them and they run into the house. The older cousin in the house asks what is
wrong. Before they could get an answer out, the man is knocking on the door
asking or something. The other girls go hide while the older cousin open the
door and talks to the man. Turns out, the man as crazy but he was looking or
directions to get down the road to find his friends house.
The impression of a short story that is also scary is magnificent here and it is very cool how you can create such intensity with such a short story. Great post!
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